I critiqued Edmund and Denise.
With Denise's work, there was good subject matter and she had a good concept of color. Her 2nd photo lacked a variety of color, however. The 3rd, I felt is the strongest in color.
With Edmund's work, I saw a steady flow of subject matter and very bright colors. There is a variety of color in each photo. I feel his 3rd photo was the best, color-wise. The 2nd photo consists of many converging lines that seem to make the composition a bit too much for the eye to handle.
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